What do you folks think of this?

I made this very short film (2 minutes 30 seconds) about the last few weeks before deer season begins here in Georgia. It’s a time that remains miserably hot and sticky but fall can be felt early in the mornings and late in the evenings.
Please let me know what you think. It started out as a poem but I decided to use it as the voiceover for this video.
Please let me know what you think.

The Call of the Fall